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Pebbles

Like pebbles tossed this lonely shore form ripples in a silent stream This weary heart dares to explore the sadness of its shattered dream While here beneath a moonlit glare where only you I search this place The heavens grasp my desperate stare for but a glimpse your perfect face Yet darkness follows close my path it wanders where I long to roam As this becomes my aftermath I yearn to only be back home Held in your arms forever tight though this I know now can not be So of these pebbles cast tonight I too shall drown this vacant sea
12/28/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/27/2018 10:07:00 AM
Wow. 'To drown a vacant sea'.
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:50:00 AM
A poem that steps with tender melancholy footsteps searching for love. Just beautiful Chris! : )
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Date: 12/30/2017 6:01:00 PM
A wonderful sadness to revel in. I hope you had a nice Christmas; I look forward to your poems in the next year :)
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Date: 12/29/2017 9:43:00 AM
I wish you back in her arms. Sad but beautiful poetry Chris
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Date: 12/29/2017 7:23:00 AM
some hit the brakes word play and short thoughts slowed this readers lonely walk along the beach with you. Well done Chris
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Date: 12/29/2017 7:15:00 AM
I can't better the first comment Chris! So lovely to see you back on soup, hope you had a lovely Christmas and my best wishes for 2018:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/28/2017 10:10:00 PM
Beautiful , Chris, is all I can say :) hugs
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Date: 12/28/2017 9:56:00 PM
You are a genius at making sadness sound so beautiful Chris. Fabulous imagery.
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