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Peanut Buster Parfait


oh delicious, thick, gooey, rich and layered hot fudge,
      And loads of peanuts on the bottom and layered to the top;
Finished with silky whipped cream and more fudge,
           Eight inches tall with mounds of soft vanilla ice-cream.

Oh the rich melting hot fudge mingling and dripping,
      So sweet and ridiculously good on a sizzling summer day;
A treat to-die-for, so heavenly yummy and decadent,
           Of course after, you may need a little nap to recover.

Oh and dream and dream of that cold velvet ice-cream,
      Divine, exquisite, delightful, the frostiness swirling within;
Such a vision, and a beautiful desire that must be fulfilled,
             I find myself saying, Peanut Buster Parfait, please.                        


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September 19, 2015

Verse

For the contest, All That Melts In Your Mouth, sponsor, Olive Eloisa Guillermo   

First Place
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Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Yes please!! Yummy write, well done on your win too ;) warm regards, Laura.
La France Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 4:27 PM
Laura, oh so yummy and a whole lot of calories, thanks for visiting ~
Cwiak Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 10:37 PM
B W, you have made me so hungry I will have to get one of these somewhere, even if I have to go to the grocery just to get the ingredients and pig out in front of the TV. Great write.
La France Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Thanks Dan, please the comment was for me...
La France Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:14 AM
Not Linda, but thanks for the compliment on my poem if meant for me ~
A. Sharma Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:20 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this yummy awesome write broken!
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:36 PM
Thank you so much Upma ~
Ebbs Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Yummy, congrats :)
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:36 PM
Thanks Ed ~
Curtis Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:42 PM
This is yummy, Broken Wing, you know your parfait-poetry
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:37 PM
Thanks for the visit Jerry ~
Scars Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:08 PM
Congrats on your win! Well deserved!! Be blessed :) -LU
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:37 PM
Thank you Laura for the congrats ~
Y. Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 5:45 PM
BW, Congratulations on your top win:-) Alexis 7
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Thanks Alexis for the support ~
Tor Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations Constance on your win!!!
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Thank you so much Michael ~
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 4:58 PM
wow, THAT is a well deserved placement. I LOVE this flavor you wrote about it, Constance. Congrats.
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:39 PM
Andrea, thanks for the visit and congrats ~
Inman Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Delectable, BW.
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:40 PM
Hi James, it is a yummy win ~
A  Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 2:54 PM
Congrats on your number one. SKAT
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Skat
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:37 PM
mmmmm a tasty win - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Thanks Jan ~
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara___Peanut Buster Parfait is one of my favorites only now I just get a hot fudge sundae with peanuts instead for it is smaller..
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:47 PM
Thanks for the congrats Sara, oh yes those peanut butter parfaits are huge ~
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Your poem is super-delicious, BW! Amazing mouth-watering description! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:48 PM
Thanks for the congrats Sandra and the nice comment ~
Richards Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Oh yes....one of my favorite combinations!! We always called it a "Tin Roof Sundae".......and I have no idea where that name came from !! Congrats to you BW !!
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Carrie, my brother was addicted to Peanut Butter Parfaits that my Mom learned to make them, it was much cheaper, the calories are over the moon however, thanks for the congrats ~
Dutta Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Excellent composition! Congratulation to win the First place Personally I don't like pea nut butter, but really I relished in your poem Best Wishes Anisha Dutta
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:51 PM
Thanks Anisha for the congrats. I am not sure why they call it Peanut Butter Parfait because there is actually no peanut butter in it, but peanuts ~
Lane Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Very sweet verses and an even sweeter win. Congratulations, BW! ~ Lin ~
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:51 PM
Thanks so much Lin ~
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Yummy! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Thanks Eve for the congrats ~
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:04 AM
Broken Wings, I really love your super mouth watering, mega-delicious and so descriptive three stanzas... MY HUGE CONGRATULATIONS~ Olive Eloisa =`)
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Thank you so much Olive for my wonderful placement in your contest, I am deeply honored ~
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:06 AM
This definitely a stand out among the entries.. =`)
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 9:51 AM
I want one NOWWWWWWWWWWWW good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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