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Peaceful Sun

Gray clouds slide on by The faint silhouette of a sun globe in the sky Moving passed the light, as it comes to be While I stand in the snow watching, Peace comes over me Heidi Sands 2/16/20

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Ann Gilmour

Date: 2/21/2020 8:18:00 AM

Such a beautiful scene you paint dear Heidi, those first rays of sunshine, oh such joy for to see, after grey winter days, like you I yearn for spring. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/21/2020 8:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Ann. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope you have a nice day :) Spring will be on the way!

Gary Smith

Date: 2/21/2020 7:57:00 AM

How calming Heidi, a lovely poem. :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/21/2020 8:05:00 AM

Thank you Gary :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/19/2020 2:27:00 PM

You grounded me in the scene you set in just a few lines, so that I too felt the peace. Superb, Heidi! Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/19/2020 5:06:00 PM

That is so good to hear. Thank you Gershon! Have a nice evening :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2020 2:05:00 PM

- A little bit of sunshine ... lovely written, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/19/2020 5:06:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and comment Anne-Lise. Have a nice evening :)

P.M. Richter

Date: 2/17/2020 8:51:00 PM

Beautiful poem Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/18/2020 2:02:00 PM

Thank you P.M. I appreciate your comment on this :)

Ann Foster

Date: 2/17/2020 10:49:00 AM

I love the last line. It is all beautiful and well written. Applause... Ann

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/18/2020 2:02:00 PM

Thank you Ann. I am happy to hear that :)

Robertina B.

Date: 2/16/2020 7:26:00 PM

Really enjoyed your wonderful write, my friend.. Has such a calming effect! Peaceful and lovely.. Blessings!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/17/2020 8:54:00 AM

That is great to hear, Robertina. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/16/2020 3:41:00 PM

Sounds like a serene environment to amble in--enjoy your day, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/16/2020 5:01:00 PM

It was very nice. Thank you Vijay :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/16/2020 3:03:00 PM

It's already spring down here in the south. Wearing shorts today. If you are happy, I am happy for you, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/16/2020 3:06:00 PM

Hi DT! That is so kind of you to say. Thank you :) I am ready for Spring now. It is nice to hear you are able to wear shorts today. I also hope all is well. Talk soon, my friend :)