Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Peaceful Light

~Peaceful Light~
                              Tonight when I fly into the sky..
                           Into your dreams I'll be passing by..
                    By candlelight I will circle your heart and soul..
                     Whisper my words and song for you to hold..
               Sweet breathless kisses touch your lips like a breeze..
       Your eyes flicker in a dream through our flight high over the trees..
                   Sleep well my sweet angel as I fade into the night..
                     I'm only a dream away to be your peaceful light



"Limitless contest"
~my dreams are limitless~

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 16, 2011 at 12:20 PM Congratulations on your win Michael. Love,Carol

Sara Kendrick May 13, 2011 at 12:25 PM Good idea for the contest..Congratulations..Sara

Jack Horne May 10, 2011 at 11:06 AM Beautiful. Many congrats on your win : )

Carrie Richards May 10, 2011 at 7:48 AM Oh, this is such a dreamy and peaceful poem....limitless in such tranquility!! Congratulations, Michael !!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 10, 2011 at 5:58 AM Congratulations on your top ten win Michael in Paula's contest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta May 10, 2011 at 5:22 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Paula, Michael

Nette Onclaud May 10, 2011 at 1:09 AM wow, michael.. may your dreams be as endless as your beautiful words! loving congrats for the illustrious win! :) hugggs!

Samual Ronthorpe May 10, 2011 at 12:01 AM I really like this. I am partial to the introspective poems to begin with. You did a great job, congrats. A write worthy to be proud of.

Gwendolen Song May 9, 2011 at 11:33 PM The beauty of our minds is where they travel while we are resting...a lovely poem so worthy of a win. The final line is excellent. I would like to refer you to my mom's sole write for this site-It is entitled, Dreams, by Carolyn Rix. I know you would enjoy it. My brother n law died 14 months ago and this event spurred her write about her dreams. Great job, Michael. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2011 at 10:13 PM You are such a sweet writer, Michael. Congratulations on your win. I am glad I took the time to see the winner list and finally see this poem of yours!

Emma Buckeridge May 9, 2011 at 10:09 PM A sweet poem, and a great win too, it's nice that certain people In our lives are only a dream away. X

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 9, 2011 at 8:09 PM Congrats my White Knight on your fabulous win in the Limitless contest with this fantastic entry luv.. enjoy a well deserved win ..your Jersey Girl forever and always luv..

Carolyn Devonshire May 1, 2011 at 9:52 PM I'm getting ready for bed and I'll be looking for you in my dreams, Michael. Would love to make contact one day. Perhaps we can still write something together when I am feeling better. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels May 1, 2011 at 1:31 PM Oh my word!! You actually remembered that.. Lol the cab business is thriving I guess, I haven't caused any accidents since that day.. Love ya Wilma

Wilma Neels May 1, 2011 at 12:43 PM lol Michael, I didn't even think of it. I was walking past him when he asked me for a hug.. So crazy me, hugged the guy *p no need to hit the gym, I owe you one remember?? lol love Wilma

Wilma Neels May 1, 2011 at 10:20 AM A peaceful feel to this, totally swept away comes to mind.. lovely write MJF :) love W

Dr.Ram Mehta May 1, 2011 at 8:41 AM You make one carried away whoever reads this, Michael

Nette Onclaud May 1, 2011 at 7:02 AM oh my, michael.. that candlelight roaming around just nailed this liltng, sentimental piece.. i need oxygen!!.. stunning! ;) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 1, 2011 at 7:01 AM Well a ggrroowwlliinngg good morning to my White Knight.. and not too much info Michael..but such fun .. my feline femme is always prevalent luv.. Ron knows that .. especially the long nails..oh.. too much info now..haha.. glad u enjoyed as I am now mesmerized by these lovely lines to soothe the savage 'cat'... your Jersey Girl in hunting mode..oh..