Bill Baker Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

Peace Comes To The Valley

The sun a golden glow
The wind began to blow
Rain a blessing for all
Summer changed into fall

Seeing the moon was blue
The change would come we knew
Trees will gently mellow
Their leaves turning yellow

Enemies will unite
No longer will they fight
Tom will marry Sally
Peace comes to the valley

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jay Narain August 26, 2025 at 10:09 AM Nice rhythmic poem. We will live happilyever after-agoodwish fortheworld. Bill Baker August 26, 2025 at 5:36 PM Thanks, Jay.

Joseph P. DiMino August 26, 2025 at 3:30 AM And live happily ever after. Oh could life be like, for everyone, the best scenarios of the heart. Well done, Bill. Bill Baker August 26, 2025 at 5:37 PM Thanks, Joe.

Gershon Wolf August 25, 2025 at 7:25 PM Tom and Sally get married. Now I know the harbinger of the Messiah. Cy N. Seeker Bill Baker August 26, 2025 at 5:37 PM Witty comments, just the way I like them, my friend. Bill

sara Etgen-Baker August 25, 2025 at 5:32 PM perfect rhyme scheme. Love the relaxed 'fall' feel of this poem! nicely done, my poet bear :-) Bill Baker August 26, 2025 at 5:38 PM You the bear! Bill

Yann Rolland August 25, 2025 at 2:05 PM so simple and natural, i think life could be like this thanks poet Bill Baker August 26, 2025 at 5:38 PM It could if enough of us really wanted it to happen. Bill

Kim Rodrigues August 25, 2025 at 10:45 AM Love it! It is dreamlike! Bill Baker August 26, 2025 at 5:39 PM Dream state escape, Kim