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Peace Comes To The Valley

The sun a golden glow
The wind began to blow
Rain a blessing for all
Summer changed into fall

Seeing the moon was blue
The change would come we knew
Trees will gently mellow
Their leaves turning yellow

Enemies will unite
No longer will they fight
Tom will marry Sally
Peace comes to the valley

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Jay Narain Date: 8/26/2025 10:09:00 AM Nice rhythmic poem. We will live happilyever after-agoodwish fortheworld. Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 8/26/2025 5:36:00 PM Thanks, Jay.

Joe Dimino Date: 8/26/2025 3:30:00 AM And live happily ever after. Oh could life be like, for everyone, the best scenarios of the heart. Well done, Bill. Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 8/26/2025 5:37:00 PM Thanks, Joe.

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/25/2025 7:25:00 PM Tom and Sally get married. Now I know the harbinger of the Messiah. Cy N. Seeker Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 8/26/2025 5:37:00 PM Witty comments, just the way I like them, my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/25/2025 5:32:00 PM perfect rhyme scheme. Love the relaxed 'fall' feel of this poem! nicely done, my poet bear :-) Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 8/26/2025 5:38:00 PM You the bear! Bill

Yann Rolland Date: 8/25/2025 2:05:00 PM so simple and natural, i think life could be like this thanks poet Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 8/26/2025 5:38:00 PM It could if enough of us really wanted it to happen. Bill

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/25/2025 10:45:00 AM Love it! It is dreamlike! Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 8/26/2025 5:39:00 PM Dream state escape, Kim