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Peace Be With You

Have you brought a smile to someone's face or soothed their pain with your embrace? There is a song, you know the words, or do you? It's sung by those who've felt loves touch and know compassion can't be too much with words by one who knows the peace is with you. Peace is with you Peace is with you Peace is with you Peace is with you No scars are felt from tenderness or blindness left from happiness sing harmony with those you touch, now will you? Spare grief with grace that shines a light and shelters from life's darkest night with hope that all will know that peace is with you. Peace is with you Peace is with you Peace is with you Peace is with you Join hands and lead us all to dance and listen hard for God to laugh as reverence rises from your soul and fills you. With childlike trust, bring faith and joy that tears of regret cannot destroy, with wishful dreams that speak of peace that's with you. Peace be with you Peace be with you Peace be with you Peace be with you With all due respect to Mr. Cohen Hallelujah...
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Awtry Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:56 PM
There is the sense of majesty here.
Awtry Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 12:06 AM
Yes! I most certainly enjoyed it. It brought to mind the presence of the Almighty passing among us.
Smith Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Hope you enjoyed it P.S.
Turnbull Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 10:46 AM
This is fantastic. So clever in its simplicity. I love the tone of this.
Smith Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Greig...
Godwin Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 8:31 PM
I deliberately came calling on you to get a much needed Charlie-fix and you delivered big time. I imagine printing this out, large, poster style, and placing it somewhere I can easily view it daily. It is beautiful and summarizes the simplicity of spirit that underscores the complexity of humanness. Love is always the answer, and harmony always promotes love - and I love the way and form with which you delivered these truths. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:36 AM
You are so kind CayCay, thank you...
Deo Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Gratia! Danke! sheshey. Dhanyabadh. Thus is Kingdom Come in foreshadowings. Like Scripture. Charlie you brought tears to my eyes. For you have touched us the way Jesus does as Deity-humanized-compassionately. amen Brother Mensch!
Smith Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:36 AM
Thank you Anil...
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October 6, 2018 at 1:05 PM
An excellent lyric Charlie, it sings so easily into the core with its inspirational wards. Such a beautiful message held within such wonderful words. I love the content my friend. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Thank you Mike...
Roper Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 3:50 PM
Charlie, great inspirational write. ~`* Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Thank you Eve...
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 2:46 PM
love the elevated feel of your work, charlie... peace!...huggs
Smith Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Thank you Nette...
Sathasivam Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 1:51 AM
Excellent lyric my friend. And let peace be with you my friend. Enjoyed reading it.
Smith Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Thank you Ravi...
Flannery Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Wow that was awesome to read. It would probably be an amazing song. Great peice Charlie. Such a kind spirit interwoven in each line. God bless
Smith Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thank you Vincent...
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September 10, 2018 at 12:08 AM
- A beautiful poem, Charlie - Peace be with you also :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise...
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September 3, 2018 at 9:30 AM
And peace be with you my friend...lovely lyric Charles...love & peace...^WW^
Smith Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Thanks WW...
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September 3, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Very creative and beautiful, I felt this from the heart!!!
Smith Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 11:35 AM
Thanks Arthur...
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September 2, 2018 at 8:24 PM
Lyrical, lovely and inspiring. Nicely done, Charlie
Smith Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Thank you Andrea...
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September 2, 2018 at 7:22 PM
The lovely lyrics of your poem set the course for my day today Charlie. Your message is a blessing for all who read your meaningful words. Thank you for sharing your inspiring song! : )
Smith Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Thanks Connie...
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September 2, 2018 at 8:15 AM
That's beautiful Charlie
Smith Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Thank you Jerry...
Onclaud Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:43 AM
charlie... what a heavenly piece which allows me to find blessings in each moment... lovely song!...huggs
Smith Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Thank you Nette...
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September 1, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Hello Charlie, Thanks for your comment on my most recent poem!! I certainly echo Vijay's comment below. One would think that Mr. Cohen is listening to you. This is a truly wondrous lyric. Smiling, tenderness shown, happiness experienced, and the childlike trust in one's self and God -- say it all!! Excellent Work!! Best, Gary
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Thanks Gary...
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September 1, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Words of peace and wisdom resonate in your poem--hope Mr. Cohen is listening to you. Your plea is summarized well in these words: Join hands and lead us all to dance and listen hard for God to laugh as reverence rises from your soul and fills you. I join in your sentiments, Charlie..may peace be with him!
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Thank you Vijay...
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September 1, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Very nice Charlie! :)
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Thank you Heidi...
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