Peace

Walk in the light Where truth puts right Dare to be clear Live without fear Make up your mind To love most kind Let peace abide To cast down pride Go on your way Live kind this day Leon Enriquez 16 November 2015 Singapore

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Dan Cwiak

Date: 11/16/2015 11:02:00 PM

Simplicity with a flair. Nicely written, Leon. I don't know if I would have spaced the stanzas so far apart from each other, as one leads to the other in its thought.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/17/2015 1:13:00 AM

Dear Dan: Thank you. The couplets can stand alone. Together they tell a story. I like to space them this way because it helps the reader to stop, feel and think. Also, it's easier on the eyes. Hope this helps. Leon