Pawns of Love

Across my bubbly cheeks
your thoughts were warm 
like an arid wind, being exhaled 
out of youthful necessity  
from the core of Mother Earth

And all days’ aches gone
into a fourteen lines of gold 
as the morning rises up

But then-- it seemed, as if you were 
eager to hear the sound of deafening silence 
when I offered you my apple heart

And why was I so eager 
to share the paradigm of my being 
when I felt that you were not 
ready to become my concluding couplet
of a Shakespearean sonnet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 28, 2009 at 12:39 PM
I'm getting mad at me...I just am not getting your verses.. I think I should? I want to..yet don't want say..what I seem to feel? Light & Love Debbie..they're like popcorn I'll try one more perhaps I'll get one with salt & butter?
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February 18, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Wow, this is a gorgeous poem. I love all the imagery! Especially the "apple heart"... is that a reference to the apple before the fall? The forbidden fruit? Thanks for commenting on my poem!
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