Paw Play

sometimes staring at a wordless emptiness of white 
hesitant fingers hover over keys like a fox ears over snow 
It's there reflecting in time's vibration smelling of salt and tar 
Lines twisted taut by steady wind firmly anchored at full sail 
Lights flash erratically through shouldering smoldering clouds 
Then thrusting forward on the turn of running tide 
Anchor lines severed as one by two well swung axes 
Left to float loose like yacht club moorings 
As the ship heels and dances over slower whitecaps 
Free as a hunting hawk and just as deadly 
Sometimes the rawness of aggressive creativity has fingers tip on wrong keys 
twisting wording and thought lines in frantic search for continuity. 
Sometimes she wallows on following seas bilges sloshing in frustration 
as the helm sluggishly stubbornly refuses to obey 
Other times the winds die and fog consumes all thoughts in clammy clutch of cold deadness 
Where in hell is that damned coffee?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/28/2008 2:57:00 PM
Splendid language and imagery, and neat alliteration too! Well done Donald!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/27/2008 1:47:00 PM
Wow, some great verbage here, I love the next to last line..If coffee would help that "cold deadness" I'd drink more..cant get inspired lately..this is wonderful though. Hope you had a lovely holiday..look forward to reading more of your work in the new year. BG
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