Pause - Pleiades

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Peace blissful and tranquil
Pervading our being
Pulsating bliss rapture
Piercing each pore of form
Prolonging ecstasy
Play of divine silence
Pouring love ceaselessly

08-April-2021

Pleiades P Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

7-lines @ 6 syllables per line

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2021 3:36:00 AM

Purposely pause and force oneself to leave. I think the snapshot is awesome. Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/16/2021 4:25:00 AM

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/13/2021 8:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. We do need to pause to find peace from time to time. Have a blessed day.........

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/13/2021 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Paula!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2021 7:08:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win ... well deserved, U.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/13/2021 8:20:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2021 1:45:00 PM

Very nicely described for that special pause of meditation!!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/12/2021 6:19:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/12/2021 1:05:00 PM

Thank you for participating in my contest and congrats on your win! Taking time to pause in the middle of busyness is always a good thing. Blessings, Kim M

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/12/2021 6:19:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! Happy you enjoyed! Thanks for hosting the contest