Get Your Premium Membership

Patina With Time

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Image result for patina architecture in ottawa ontario

Related image

I love my city for the old architecture that can be found in the downtown area. The beautiful fading homes that hold so much charm and the many copper, patina roofs and details scattered throughout on many Gothic buildings. A walk is so lovely. I often go for strolls down shady streets, passing majestic homes. Wishing I could see beyond the patina doors. I call these strolls my city hikes. Our parliament buildings are like castles with their green copper roofs. I used to dream I was a princess in one of the top windows waiting for my prince to come. I love the brick so solid and grey and the steeples and statues of bronze now gone patina with time. I love how the new and the old entwine. the pigeons come cooing and strutting each day- a church bell rings loud __________________________ June 28, 2018 Poetry/Haibun/Patina in Time Copyright Protected, ID 18-1035-584-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/30/2018 7:58:00 AM
Enchanting read! Beautifully done.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2018 7:47:00 PM
I'm back.. and it was worth the return. Your write is tredendous!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2018 5:16:00 PM
fabulous descriptive haibun BW I love the form you chose for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2018 4:51:00 PM
Get busy :)
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 6/28/2018 5:14:00 PM
Lol... finally done !!!! Do come back Lyric Man.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things