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Patient Storm

Thunder shakes bitter rain from distant clouds, while, as if in pain, they roil across the heavens. Lightening licks the jagged mountain rim, leaving behind a burning kiss, that scars. All the while, wind cries out, releasing anger to send debris flying. And here I stand, watching it all, patiently waiting to feel that first drop.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/17/2019 10:40:00 AM
Nicely penned poem. Good visuals and good last line.
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:12:00 PM
This had my waiting in anticipation also! Your writing stands out among the many who post here......you are very talented.
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Date: 9/2/2012 1:14:00 PM
An excellent write, Paula! I feel like I've spent too much time waiting for a storm, myself. Now I'm trying to embrace each one without fear. Hugs to you, Rhonda
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Date: 9/2/2012 3:26:00 AM
I like the emotions you ascribe to the elements: thunder in pain and the wind crying in anger. Good poetry, Paula. Well done on this piece. :)
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Date: 9/1/2012 7:53:00 PM
Hi Paula, it is nice reading your poem today... i like the image you are waiting for...I feel like grabbing an umbrella all of a sudden... I feel as if your storm will come to live soon,,, xox~pd
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