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Patience

When I hear you say, “have patience,” I want to tell you about the wheel and the mule - when both stop, both die a little. Then there are the sailing boat sails when the wind stops. Then there are marbles when thrown they are lively, kept in a jar – not so much. Patience is some kind of religious, mature virtue that religious and mature people rage about on Sundays. I have noticed that they thump that biblical text like they have zero patience. Maybe it’s just me, but I want passion, the way a bad steak needs ‘A1’ sauce. Handles are also made so, folks like me can occasionally fly off them. When the world began not one molecule of life had one bit of patience, and we are still figuring out ways to press that accelerator harder.

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Date: 8/16/2019 2:36:00 PM
The poem was thoughtful. After all these efforts we need to learn or unlearn. This struggle is also a test of patience. For you, for me, for all. Thanks.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 8/16/2019 3:22:00 PM
Yep, life is a conundrum within an enigma wrapped up in Taco shell. All we can do is eat it and like it. I tried being a Buddhist once, but could never sit still long enough to do all that chanting stuff. Thanks for this kind review.
Date: 8/16/2019 12:19:00 PM
Oh I love this. Tucking it into the faves drawer. Soup mail. xomo!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 8/16/2019 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, I guess this little bit of a poem struck a chord or cord (never can get it right), with a few people. Cheers!

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