Patience

i sit within this darkened room
while contemplating death
examining my life ahead
each day’s become a test

i need to ascertain the core
and reason for my pain
because if i don’t find it soon
i won’t see morrow’s day

my bourbon’s neat and mind’s a mess
i’m barely holding on
it’s been some time since she left me
still mourning that she’s gone

i need to reconcile this loss
in turn becoming whole
for Jesus has prepared a room
for her eternal soul

my faith reminds that i will see
this mitigates my pain
is patience what i’m want to learn
‘fore i see her again

Lord please forgive my daily sins
these wages i have earned
i’ve gone through an internal war
i’ve lessons yet to learn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Blown Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:29 AM
we're in a set of wheel rings inside a set of wheel rings cycling...life...a spin around the park : )
Michael Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:16 AM
A testimony of pain and surrender...Well done Jess
Opperman Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:28 AM
first of all, thank you for your comment. i always read a sample of poetry from a commenter. i read several, but the one that stood out for me was "She's Gone". It mirrors my life and emotions. thank you for the read and thank you for your poem. i will read more of your works. i think we have much in common. bless you, Arturo.
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