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Pastoral Passage - Church Crypt

Butterfly wing door vestibule builds anticipation Shuffled, carpet muffled greetings, familiar embraces Piloted by Holy Spirit, seated hushed congregation Ritual of ornate cathedral thanks hidden crypt rib cage Enduring centuries, pliable sandstone testiment God's following holds time proof tenacity Flared proud corners, pyramid reminiscent Honour continues amidst shifting society Solid oak panelled door on wrought iron hinges Greets round barrel key bearer with ominous groan Down four slouching stone steps from street edge Solo visit in sacred space never partaken alone Curved bookcases cater for leather bound learning Volumes of theology define best ways Nook with desk lets liturgist imbibe God's word Tall back chair, acorn emblems engraved Beneath majestic vessel, clay damp chamber Rhubarb velvet curtain, tassel tied to sides Strongest entity relies on the Lord as Saviour With worship's dedication, faith survives In expansion, searcher emerges at alter, cleansed Hive of etched arches tribute precision architectural Vibrant robes, sashes draped, silken beacons Of preparation, celebration of overcoming, renewal Pulpit's ingrained memory both daunting and welcoming Deep set lead light showers sombre pews in intimacy Haloed Christ holds baby, shares parables with children Crease covered hymn books strum procedural symphony Written July 2020 (no previous submission) Submitted for : Brian Strand Completely New Volume 23 on 18th August 2020

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Date: 9/17/2020 12:54:00 AM
I could actually smell of this Hallowed place as you brought it forth (vivid) and with stunning accompaniment, incense. ~Jude
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/17/2020 1:26:00 AM
So sweet of you. Thank you, Jude.
Date: 9/2/2020 9:32:00 AM
Sigrid, congratulations on having your wonderful poem selected as a Featured Poem this week, enjoy the honor, a FAV for me _Constance
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/2/2020 7:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. That's extremely kind
Date: 8/20/2020 10:53:00 PM
Sigrid this is breathtalking in the imagery and the emotion that carries us through this beautiful worship place. Congratulations on your winning placement! Well deserved.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/20/2020 11:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. Admire your work a lot, looking forward to reading more of it.
Date: 8/18/2020 8:46:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in Brian's contest with your majestic pastoral pen, Sigrid! Grandeur and Glory, Gershon
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/18/2020 6:42:00 PM
Quick examination of house of mighty force. Ta, Gershon.
Date: 7/3/2020 8:51:00 PM
What a beautiful church your imagination has either recalled or created.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 7/3/2020 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, Caren.! Yes, from faint small child memories, my father had the crypt key. I should probably watch some You Tube clips, but that can sometimes jeopardise ability to express well.

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