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does the bush on his face hide his smile or scorn? what if each whisker was plucked? would it hurt? would hundreds of miles away zoom close to home, soft as a newborn cradled and miniature — dollhouse size... far far away, a dot in the apple of my eye — a microscopic teardrop 9/3/2018

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Date: 9/4/2018 2:17:00 PM
Yes it would hurt! That's why men shave rather than pluck.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2018 2:32:00 PM
I think you miss the point. Poetry is not always literal. ;)

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