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Past My Prime

In honesty I must admit I’m slipping slowly past my prime. I hadn’t noticed transformation Happening to me over time. Though my memory needed prodding, When I forgot an old friend’s name,. I told myself I hadn’t changed And still looked very much the same. But windexing my mirror in A seizure of fanatic clean, Took the forgiving film away, The hidden changes to unscreen. I can no longer tell myself A candid picture of me lies. I must accept as fact the face I had refused to recognize..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/7/2011 6:44:00 PM
k, Joyce... this was everything I expected it to be... which is why I didn't click on it 'til now... am reading "Tuesdays with Morrie" about halfway through, have you ever read it? Thank you for being, I'm real glad I found ya, sweet dreams and namaste~N
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Date: 11/5/2011 9:30:00 PM
oh,my, this really hits home for those of us starting to see what you mean. But you will never be past your prime in your talent, dear.
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