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Passionate Eyes

Passionate eyes Compassionate tears Free flowing down cheeks Of tender skin Keeping eyes close Loves great caress Sending waves of joy
Russell Sivey Entrant into Joann Grisetti's "Shanzi" contest 6/24/2012

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Date: 7/26/2012 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2012 2:12:00 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:32:00 AM
Russell congrats on your win, very romantic...David
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Date: 7/22/2012 9:52:00 AM
Such sensual and equally emotive lines, Russell! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/22/2012 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations, Russell, it was a poem of great feeling.
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Date: 7/21/2012 8:13:00 AM
Wonderful Shanzi!Congrats Russell on your win!!
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Date: 7/21/2012 5:35:00 AM
oh yes Russell major congrats on this win as this poem is beyond passionate and emotiional.. u captured the true beauty of love my friend..
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Date: 6/27/2012 12:11:00 AM
"and blest to the horizon" i jest :) well done here mate
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Date: 6/26/2012 2:32:00 PM
Winning material for sure..Very passionate and expressive..This speaks of a sensitive person..Thanks for stopping by..We have had wonderful wind all day...Sara
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Date: 6/25/2012 8:55:00 PM
very romantic and pretty . ME LIKES.
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:27:00 AM
beautiful entry for Joann's contest, my friend
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:35:00 AM
oh. the unmentionable lightness of your images, russell... to be passionate and compassionate, what a tandem.. winning huggs! :)
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Date: 6/25/2012 4:15:00 AM
Hi Russell, I don't remember if u judged the Midnight Pearl contest or not, BUT I found this article on the yahoo news group this a.m. that is so similar to the story in my poem from Dayton. My poem was called Black Pearl...check this one out...It is downright SCARY what the mother did to her daughter! http://news.yahoo.com/police-rescue-malnourished-girl-closet-kansas-city-161117342--abc-news-topstories.html People are so cruel!! :) gwenodlen
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:29:00 PM
great entry for the contest, beautifully done
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:26:00 PM
very beautiful and tender poem
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