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Passing Star

Moving light in the night, your glow shines in my heart so deep Illuminating my mind with thoughts so pure bright lovingly Fate caused you to pass my way, and I looked with wonder at your pretty prismatic procession Rainbow dreams of you fill my night sky, as a new dawn hope arise I saw a beautiful passing star twinkle in my eye It lit the fire that had long ago died A scintillating vision of pure passion left a comet trail of ecstatic tears The passing aurora years have again arrived Such a dazzling sight ... as I bask in this midnight farewell joyous cry A new journey to love — heartbeat moving faster than light Pure paradise flight This bright tomorrow kissed yesterday’s passing sorrow forever goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/20/2019 12:36:00 PM
Simply beautiful Freddie :-) x
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Date: 10/23/2018 7:28:00 AM
Brilliant images paint this poem with sadness, memories tasting like sunlight in the wee hours. Masterful!
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Date: 10/2/2018 8:00:00 AM
This is beautiful Freddie and I love the ending. A favorite :)
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Date: 10/2/2018 6:58:00 AM
Rainbow dreams of you....oh, wow, you really have my imagination soaring now, Freddie.
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Date: 10/2/2018 12:03:00 AM
a beautiful description of a wide vision ...nice one
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:02:00 PM
There are always more memories to be made even though we think we've had the best, already. Beautifully romantic, lonely, happy and sad all in one. You imagery is always on cue. Well done.
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