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contest Writing Challenge-P- words sponsor Constance La France

Winter's freezing cold wind holds close when my eyes captured you walking slowly each step was a fluid motion of grace dark orbs met in a moment of understanding as our hands in unison found clarity and with only a hint of acknowledgment lifted our warm collars to stifle the wind as we silently passed one another while walking in the snow

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Date: 7/31/2023 8:40:00 PM
"silently passed one another while walking in the snow" - Very great writing on a simple theme. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/31/2023 12:35:00 PM
- A brief moment, a chance encounter - traces left behind - A great and deep poem, Frederic:) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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