Passersby

And so I say, please take my hand
Share with me on my immaculate bed
A box of chocolates, black and filled
with all those goodies we so missed.

Why feels this city so alone, so empty
with all these people running, pushing
As if I don't exist, and nor do you
Shall we feel our still-alive together?

You have your wife, I understand
But when we kiss we both forget
I want you more than you can give
So go before you can't forgive

Yourself, and nor would I, confused.
I love you, strange and clumsy man
We were just passersby, your lips
Are imprinted in my heart, forever.

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"Lost in Translation"
3d place in contest: Movie Mania - Romance
Sponsored by Nicola Byrne
September 30, 2016

 For those curious about the very last line in the film, for those wondering about that for years now, here it is:
“I have to be leaving, but I won’t let that come between us. OK?”
Now, ain't that sweet :)
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Allison Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 3:11 AM
Many congrats Darren - I will watch the movie one day:-) Hugs Jan xx
White Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 3:21 AM
Ooohh, thanks Jan :)
Arnone Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 10:50 PM
I'll second Nicola's sentiment. I cool, Spring/Winter romantic comedy. You've captured my fav actors, Bill Murray and Scarlett Johansson, well.... Congrats!
White Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 12:23 AM
Bill Murray is fantastic, and this film is my favourite. Thank you :)
Godwin Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 7:58 PM
First, a question I've never asked and you may never have been asked - are you a female? Or a male able to feel the movie emotions of a female character? Either way, I'm impressed and very much like this poem. I have to limit my comments to the emotional poem itself - I haven't seen the movie. The 2nd stanza especially touched me - how alone we can be crowded by other people. Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
White Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 8:49 PM
I am not sure if this is what you expect, but I am male and gay, and many people find me quite effeminate... Thank you for the compliment. Darren.
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 3:12 PM
I've just read the info on the film Darren and I am tempted to watch it after reading your poem :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
White Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Thanks Jan. It is a wonderful film. Enjoy :)
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