Parts and Counterparts

PARTS AND COUNTERPARTS

scrawled on the blackboard jungle, a mural
of profanity – pronouncing women’s names,
their parts and counterparts. reality creeps

from the verminous city streets.  the mundanity of
laying out private jewels as a juxtaposition,
where silk and careful hands of morality are much kinder

and richer.  but humanity takes hold of a fair lady’s dress,
tearing it off, shredding the human form to pieces,
leaving it drowning, cut off, creating the volcanity of a whore.

of this insanity is born the fatality of our newborn, with
no need for formality.  the brutality of drug dealers and
youth molesters pulls the innocents down into the sewers.

they sense, they know, something is not right, but their fingers
slip, their feet cannot grip the slimy pit that drags them down

down
          down


no one hears their cries for help.  smoke like fog swirls around
their sacrificial heads.  their eyes bleed with blue breaths.
the inanity and anonymity of their broken lives unbearable.

the mentality of cobblestone above their shattered roof, flowing
with the vitality of gold, silver and diamond luxury. a boy, a girl
can hear the click of red heels, the laughter of freedom, just out of reach.

he screams, “no, come back!”
she screams, “someone hear my cries, before i die!”

urbanity, so at ease. no one sneeze. no address of poor kindling tied
to the monster’s altar, where malicious eyes and tongues squeeze out laughter.

1/23/2017
Silent One’s Word Challenge Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nusker Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 11:30 PM
A wonderful acrostic with bold social remarks and the words are used very neatly. A 7
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Afzal! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 2:43 PM
I am in AWE Kim! Silent's words really inspired you and this is a Masterpiece! 7+ ; )
Rodrigues Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Thanks so much, Connie!
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