Particles of Dust

Small particles of dust leisurely float in the rays,
[Bright sunshine glancing through a curtained windowpane]
Settle gently to the floor, their origins hard to explain,
We ponder the beginning and the ending of our days.

Our lives slowly drift homeward like those particles of dust,
Leaving behind lingering memories of discarded stuff,
Telling us to give them up; surely, surely enough is enough.
Time passing, our treasures become orange-stained, like rust.

A sudden loud knock at the door--a grandchild breezes in
Bright, lovely, and excited with invigorating cheer;
Renews our feeling we had a fine reason to be here,
And wondering what it would be like to start all over again.

FIRST PLACE WINNER
March 7, 2021
Brian Strand's "All Yours"
March 27, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/28/2021 7:18:00 PM
Grandchildren are great motivators to keep going. Congrats on your win, Milton! Blessings, Kim M
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/28/2021 7:45:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Yes, indeed, they are!
Date: 3/28/2021 12:47:00 PM
Brian made a good choice as a winner in his contest with this splendid entry. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/28/2021 5:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Robert. It is generally all quiet on the western front until a grandchild pops in!
Date: 3/11/2021 11:15:00 PM
"A sudden loud knock at the door--a grandchild breezes in" I love the way this poem took off on a run at this point! I have 10 grandchildren and pictured one specific one!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/12/2021 10:08:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. I live too far from my grandchildren, but they stay in touch. I miss living close to them like I did my grandma.
Date: 3/8/2021 2:58:00 PM
So beautiful your poem! I really love the way you write with the imagery style. It's like we were watching a small scene of a movie where we could feel the emotions and see the metaphors!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/8/2021 3:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vasco. Your thoughts were so meaningful to me.
Date: 3/7/2021 7:36:00 PM
Your words are sad. My poetry is just messing with minds, but yours is very mindful. After reading this I feel like not submitting any more. I'm simply playing a mind game, where your words hopefully are making a difference; at least a difference to me. I know I never expected PoetrySoup viewers to admit that they had read my poems, so at first it was great that I saw their views; but after reading this poem I want to read their comments as well but know they never will admit reading mine THANKS
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/7/2021 9:33:00 PM
Marcela, I have read several of your poems and found them very interesting. Keep writing; we'll keep reading. Thanks so much for your kind words about my pieces.
Date: 3/7/2021 2:14:00 PM
I absolutely adore this one, friend. It's gorgeous and glorious! A wonder and wonderful. So lovely. God bless you with many more. Love, Gina
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/7/2021 4:21:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Gina. I enjoyed writing it. Glad you liked it!
Date: 3/7/2021 12:38:00 PM
Dear L MILTON, the last line of your exceptional soul searching poem grabbed my heart. I find myself thinking about the very same subject and I am about to post a poem (as soon as I title it) about my arrival at the same thought, as contemplated by seeing myself in my (young adult) child; “wondering what it would be like to start all over again.” I enjoyed your deep, sensitive and thought provoking poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/7/2021 12:57:00 PM
Well thanks, Susan. I'm glad you found it meaningful and could relate to it. I look forward to reading your poem. I'll look for it in New Poems.
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