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Parthenon At Midnight

The harvest specter
of Artemis levitates
in midnight sky
beyond a temple's frail bones.

Her aura imbues the marrow
as haunted zephyrs breathe imperial runes
culled from quarries
in the scintillating saffron 
emblazoning Apollo's halcyon.

Atop graveyards of heroes
pillars weep dry pebbles to Aegean eminence,
from Alexander's subjugated Persians
to Agamemnon’s trickery
on the plains of Troy.

When marble shadows lengthen
and drift in her shifting light
the moon goddess
stills all whispers
as she mourns the spectacle of bravura
retreating to dust.

6/20/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 6:21 PM
A long guilded sigh after reading this sparkling gem Dale! You are a poet's poet my friend. Congratulations on being in the top three! : )
Cozart Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 6:24 PM
Thank you for reading, Connie!
Cornish Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Dale, this is exceptional writing and I almost ranked this first for good reason. I f anyone wants to study how a poem about an otherwise simple scene can be described so artistically, this is a perfect example.
Cozart Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Thank you so very much, Craig.
Gentry Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Back to congratulate you again on your win again. Well done!
Cozart Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thanks, Susan.
Wigley Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:36 AM
This is a fine piece, Dale, hugely atmospheric, well done! Regards, Viv
Cozart Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thanks much, Viv.
Richards Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 7:41 PM
You gave this subject such a legendary and mythical twist, Dale, and it is wonderful ! I love the unique direction your pen led your thoughts....to the moon of the ages! Congrats to you !!
Gauthier Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 6:27 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Dale. Well penned.
Cozart Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Thanks very much, Line.
Gentry Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful imagery. :)
Stebbings Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:44 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dale, with this brilliant piece. Barry
Cozart Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Thanks much,Barry!
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win and well crafted write . Hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Congrats Dale on a wonderful winning poem!
Cozart Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Thank you very much, John.
Barden Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:08 AM
And oh, how brave Achilles would revere that photograph! Charming write, Dale - I enjoyed this thoroughly! :-)
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