Manny Paras Poet Dodoitsu

Part 2: Fully Booked

blood of fury desecrates

youngsters maimed by household strife

till church gongs ring of mercy

---love offerings pledged


Contest: Part 2 , Fully Booked
War and Peace
For nette onclaud    23 June 2016

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Nette Onclaud June 26, 2016 at 10:42 AM yes, the better side of one's spirit sends piece, manny... different take on the theme.. my congrats and thanks for taking time to participate in my contest.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2016 at 9:42 AM Way to go, manny. Congrats on your win.