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His bluest eye, oh that blue, Like the azure sky above; As deep as the blue ocean, Dead eyes, fathomless. ______________________________ June 23, 2016 Poetry/Dodoitsu/Part 2- Fully Booked Copyright Protected, ID 16-803-635-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Inspiration - "The Bluest Eye" Novel Title For the contest, Part 2, Fully Booked sponsor, Nette Onclaud Third Place

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Date: 6/26/2016 10:10:00 AM
i got enthralled by your last 2 lines, constance-- great metaphor... sweet congrats on your award in my contest.. huggs
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Date: 6/26/2016 9:33:00 AM
Big congrats, Constance. Ruben is right about that last line. And I just noticed I had already said that as well!!
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Date: 6/26/2016 8:21:00 AM
Heartfelt, as usual, Constance!
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Date: 6/25/2016 8:53:00 PM
It has to be a 7 for this, Broken Wings! Congrats on your win. ~karam~
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Date: 6/25/2016 4:05:00 PM
A 7 for this thought-provoking piece, a winner, Constance! Janice
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Date: 6/23/2016 9:02:00 PM
wicked twist in that last line. Well written and a brilliant take on the book title theme
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Date: 6/23/2016 8:40:00 PM
wow, the last line changed it! Great job with the theme.
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