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Part-Time Poet

A part-time poet's destined to be plagued by pressure The press of time, the pulse of work, vanished years Barely a moment to reflect, swirling phrases unmeasured Envisioning the thrill -- pondering ideas at leisure The press of time, the pulse of work, vanished years Bloody lies my train of thought, derailed once more Envisioning the thrill -- pondering ideas at leisure What wouldn't I give for such unimaginable pleasure Bloody lies my train of thought, derailed once more To start over -- Where was I? -- Cauldrons of frustration What wouldn't I give for such unimaginable pleasure Dream on, part-time poet, of vast unattainable treasure Comes my annual vacation, free at last from work's shackles Alas, stay-cations raise beloved family members' hackles To start over -- Where was I? -- Cauldrons of frustration Barely a moment to reflect, swirling phrases unmeasured Alas, stay-cations raise beloved family members' hackles Wistful aspirations decimated, grim rations of jackals Barely a moment to reflect, swirling phrases unmeasured A part-time poet's destined to be plagued by pressure June 30, 2019 Entry: Part-time Poet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 7/11/2019 6:58:00 PM
Although the tone was a bit dark for you, I can appreciate where you're coming from, congratulations and thanks for entering my contest!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/11/2019 8:23:00 PM
Yes, you're right. The tone was a bit (too) dark. I realized that on re-reading the poem a day after I'd posted it, but by then...I just let it go. Still and all, not a bad effort...And thank you, Michelle, for recognizing it for the truth there was to it. Appreciated. :) gw
Date: 7/11/2019 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Gershon :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/11/2019 10:12:00 AM
Thank you for noticing, Heidi, and congrats to you too on your win! :) gw
Date: 7/10/2019 10:29:00 PM
"Plagued by pressure indeed". Well penned, Gershon. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/11/2019 10:11:00 AM
Thank you, Line, and congrats on your win in the same contest as well! :) gw
Date: 7/2/2019 7:40:00 AM
Wonderfully done! Good luck in Michelle's contest, my friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/2/2019 12:36:00 PM
Thank you for the support...You know, if I had to do it over again, I would make this pantoum much happier. I've read some great poems for this contest; they are much sunnier than mine... Oh, well. :) gw
Date: 6/30/2019 4:22:00 PM
Wow! Great one Gershon! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/30/2019 6:03:00 PM
Thanks for the enthusiastic feedback on this pantoum, Heidi! :) gw

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