Parking Lot

Fears that the
escalator to get 
down to the 
 parking lot
stifling you..
 The 
Pile does not end.
 
 
Cars together as people
do not let you go
pass between. 
This madness.
 
Clutch   with madness on your mop.
Underground garage
A book of poems
Born yesterday
Crushed
Claw.
Instead of hands
 Cold metal
Prosthesis
Still silent.
 
I'm bleeding on the way
not sold
 
not enough
 Gorgeous
 
Not enough
Poet
 
Are you afraid?
are you afraid?
are you afraid?
not  to be 
shown
as a
Po-et
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 10, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... soup offers many contests on site.. check them out and enter and good luck with luv..
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September 10, 2010 at 4:45 PM
What a beautiful afternoon to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Shoshana. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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