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Paris Pales

PARIS PALES Paris is in pain and I am home safe and free from bombs and bullets, but not quite sure if what happened there can not happen here in my home town, in my safe place. What little imagination must I use to see it happen here? When men think they are right and all others are wrong, are we safe from their reach? If men would rather die in war than live in peace, are we safe from their outstretched arms? Where are the women, with their inherited good sense, to tell these men they’re goal is absurd, and they, these oppressed women, want their sons to live long, fruitful lives. Without them, we are lost, they are lost, and their children are already dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/17/2015 7:22:00 PM
A powerful write Richard, makes you stop and think
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Date: 11/17/2015 12:21:00 PM
- Hey Richard :) - A lovely time to start in an poetry club, autumn and winter is a time we spend a lot of time inside our homes - More time to read and write poetry - I wish you an enjoyable time and warm welcome :) -Thanks for your great first poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Morgan
Date: 11/19/2015 8:18:00 AM
Anne, your note is written like poetry. Thank you for taking the time.
Date: 11/16/2015 11:12:00 PM
Richard, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/15/2015 10:12:00 PM
Richard, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Richard Morgan
Date: 11/16/2015 7:16:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome.
Date: 11/15/2015 5:53:00 PM
Hi Richard, this is such an excellent piece that I look forward to reading more of your work! As this piece shows, sadly, none of us is safe. Unfortunately, what happened in Paris can happen any where else in the world. Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/17/2015 1:07:00 PM
Richard, I think you can go to the "Member Area" at the top left hand side. But I think that only Premium Members can provide a bio. Or go to "My Poems" and click on "My Wall" to see if you can provide a bio there. All the best. Pandita
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Richard Morgan
Date: 11/16/2015 7:17:00 PM
Thank you. Can you tell me how I list my bio? I need a manual...

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