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Parallel Universe

Prophetic Permutations Abysmal Affinity Relinquished Relics Auspicious Ancestry Lofty Lineage Luminous Labyrinth Entangled Ensorcellment Lunatic Liaison Unwavering Universe Nocturnal Nature Insidious Impulse Voluptuous Vortex Enigmatic Enchantment Roaming Rhapsody Supernatural Symmetry Ethereal Exaltation AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on April 3, 2018 to contest EARLY MAY PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 4/4/2018 2:45:00 AM
I accidentally "discovered" this was an acrostic while trying to figure it out, and the complex way you have straightened it all out in your mind is super-human. Great acrostic, Line. I think they are the most difficult to write. My muse and I are standing here, side by side. I'm clapping big; she's clapping little, but she is much smaller than I. Love it!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/4/2018 6:24:00 AM
Thank you and your muse so much for taking the time to figure it out. Most appreciated, Caren.
Date: 4/3/2018 6:37:00 PM
Wow... Prized Poetry
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/7/2018 11:32:00 PM
Hi Again... there is a possibility that in the parallel universe, Pashang is writing about Parallel universe and Line is writing the comments....
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 8:44:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Pashang.
Date: 4/3/2018 4:44:00 PM
Hi Line , Perfect form for parallel universe Great job my friend~~::)))Hugs~~~Niall
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 8:44:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Niall.
Date: 4/3/2018 4:37:00 PM
beautiful prism of a universe in harmony with other words with alliterative phrases, line... huggs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 8:45:00 PM
Thank you very much for your lovely visit and comment, nette.
Date: 4/3/2018 1:44:00 PM
WOW! Extraordinary the way you doubled everything. Great job. (PS) - I totally believe in parallel universes.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 8:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Phil.

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