Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

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Predictable, practical pose

as a simple sentence suggests,

accepting how the story goes,

while syllables shape silhouettes.

 

~ Simple scribbles serenade me ~

 

Paragraphs, hold poise and power

while illuminating passion,

and thoughts anticipate the hour,

forms flow in a feathered fashion.

 

~ Sonnets and sweet simplicity ~

 

Playful, parallel poetry

cause positions to part and pause,

dimensions divide, dive deeply,

and lines love to linger, because.

 

~ Synonyms sing a symphony ~

 

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** As thoughts twirl, they paint a picture **

           Please the senses with Poetry

      ( 8 syllable count within each line )

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Predictable, practical pose
as a simple sentence suggests,
accepting how the story goes,
while syllables shape silhouettes.

~ Simple scribbles serenade me ~

Paragraphs, hold poise and power
while illuminating passion,
and thoughts anticipate the hour,
forms flow in a feathered fashion.

~ Sonnets and sweet simplicity  ~

Playful, parallel poetry
cause positions to part and pause,
dimensions divide, dive deeply,
and lines love to linger, because.

~ Synonyms sing a symphony ~


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* As thoughts twirl, they paint a picture *
        Please the senses with Poetry

   ( 8 syllable count within each line )

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Michael Ramel June 21, 2025 at 12:53 PM #62 not to shabby....the alliteration is great....blessings.....Michael Brandy Nicole June 26, 2025 at 9:34 AM Hi Michael, I had no idea this poem was in that spot. Thank you for letting me know and for your lovely comment. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. :) Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 13, 2024 at 5:20 AM Dear Brandy, Your poem was a delightful dance on words! You play with form and language with such wit, turning the poem itself into a playful exploration of its own construction. Each Line capture the sheer joy of language and creative expression. And the playful repetition of "~" adds a charming musicality to the poem. I love how you dissect traditional poetry's form and hint at hidden depths within this deceptively simple structure. Your poem is refreshing in that even the most familiar forms can be reinvented with creativity and a dash of playfulness. I very much enjoyed your poem. - Blessings, Daniel Brandy Nicole February 15, 2024 at 9:04 AM Dear Daniel, aligning words ( using alliteration ) and then posing each paragraph, certainly is a playful way to be expressive. I've combined both in this scribble of mine, while counting syllables. I'm in complete awe with your comment, along with all your compliments. Poetry is art in motion, and I enjoyed creating each magical moment within. Thank you my dear friend, for sharing in detail, how this poem made you feel. My heart is smiling. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Harsha Singh January 11, 2024 at 2:55 AM Amazing alliteration,word choice is brilliant... Brandy Nicole January 11, 2024 at 6:50 PM Thank you Harsha, for your lovely comment. I appreciate the compliment as well. My best to you. :) Brandy

Beryl Edmonds November 26, 2023 at 6:12 PM Simply sensational Brandy, superb stellar scribbles indeed. I admire your poetic skill… Belle Brandy Nicole November 27, 2023 at 7:34 PM Dear Belle, thank you for all your kind words and compliments. I wouldn't say I'm a skilled poetess, just one that enjoys scribbling outside the lines. :) Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Thank you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Karen Jones October 20, 2023 at 12:54 AM Wonderful alliteration and word choice. Great poem and photo. Good luck in the contest. Brandy Nicole October 21, 2023 at 6:59 PM Thank you, Karen. I enjoyed creating this using an eight syllable count in every line. It's not for a contest, it was written just because. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. :) Brandy

Joe Maverick October 3, 2023 at 12:22 PM I really enjoyed the flow of your apprecuation Brandy., a relaxing rendering of possibility's Well poised.' Brandy Nicole October 5, 2023 at 7:07 PM Thank you for saying the possibilities are well poised. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. I appreciate your lovely comment, Joe. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Robert Lindley September 9, 2023 at 4:48 AM My dear friend you with this playful fine ne creation show how truly great poetry is presented. A very fine pleasure to read his gem this fine morn. A definitive fav and thanks. God bless you. Brandy Nicole September 10, 2023 at 6:09 PM Dear Robert, your lovely comment leaves me in complete awe. So kind of you to say that I'm able to create great poetry. Thank you for placing this is your favorites as well. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 9:32 PM Now I have discovered you, this is lyrically gorgeous like angelic serenade for my ears. Very lovely, Brandy:) Brandy Nicole June 29, 2023 at 8:12 PM Dear Christopher, thank you for reading this little scribble of mine, and for discovering my poetry. This is one of my favorites. You and your kind words are greatly appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Hat Bueckert April 29, 2023 at 10:37 PM This is fantastic, well placed alliteration and nice and light to read, like you're flowing through the words. Well done :) Brandy Nicole April 30, 2023 at 5:52 PM Thank you, Hat. I'm in complete awe with your lovely comment, along with your wonderful compliment. I'm just a simple woman that enjoys the simplicity of words. I appreciate you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paige Hind March 8, 2023 at 10:21 AM Just beautiful... Brandy Nicole March 8, 2023 at 7:14 PM Thank you, Paige. I appreciate you and your kind words. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Fin Chuuk January 29, 2023 at 8:41 PM A FABULOUS parallel poetry. Girl, your style is breathtaking! Brandy Nicole January 30, 2023 at 7:25 PM Thank you, Fin. I'm smiling and blushing with you saying my style is breathtaking. You and your kind words are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Supraja Kannan January 26, 2023 at 4:52 AM Oh!!! How beautiful!!!! Loved the use of words and emotions, so beautifully penned... " Synonyms sing a symphony... What a lovely imagery!!! Loved it Brandy.. A fav... Brandy Nicole January 27, 2023 at 7:20 PM I'm breathless with you saying this. Thank you, Supraja. Words are both powerful and passionate. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Harry Horsman January 24, 2023 at 12:47 AM Love the power of these gems, Brandy, the letters 'P and S' play there part, in this a serious sensitive poem. Brandy Nicole January 24, 2023 at 5:56 PM Thank you, Harry. My muse thought these particular letters were satisfying and poetic. You and your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2023 at 10:07 AM i really like this and the type of poetry it entails. Love these two lines especially:orms flow in a feathered fashion. ~ Sonnets and sweet simplicity ~ Brandy Nicole January 21, 2023 at 2:47 PM I enjoyed creating this simple, yet sophisticated scribble. Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate your thoughts and for sharing what lines you liked the best. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

M. L. Kiser January 20, 2023 at 2:41 PM Some wonderful alliteration in this piece; well done. Brandy Nicole January 20, 2023 at 5:32 PM So kind of you to say. Thank you, M. L . You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joanna Daniel January 19, 2023 at 7:13 AM Rereading this beauty yet again, and am left mesmerized, Brandy:) adding to my faves:) Brandy Nicole January 19, 2023 at 6:16 PM Thank you Jo, for coming back to read this again. So kind of you to place this in your favorites as well. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Ashley January 16, 2023 at 6:18 PM Dearest Brandy, my lovely friend and inspiring poetess, it's been a while since I've melted into your teasing, tempting, playful, sensual and eloquent imagination. The way you play with words is breathtaking! I adore the graceful, ethereal ripples created through the Universe by your exquisite artistry. Warmest wishes for a happy new year, sweet lady.. ~Susan Brandy Nicole January 17, 2023 at 6:24 PM Susan, my dear sweet friend. You always know the right words to say, and this comment is beyond breathtaking. My heart is smiling, simply because you've taken a moment of your time, to read this little scribble of mine. I'm in complete awe with your thoughts. Thank you so much. My best to you, in the New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kelly Deschler January 15, 2023 at 10:24 AM I believe that the best poems do "have lines that linger, because", and this is one of those rare poems... Beautifully written, Brandy... Brandy Nicole January 15, 2023 at 7:29 PM I wouldn't refer to my poetry as rare. My heart is smiling. Such a wonderful thing to say, Kelly. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph P. DiMino January 15, 2023 at 5:52 AM Wow! Beautiful write! True poetry! A FAVE! Brandy Nicole January 15, 2023 at 7:23 PM Thank you Joe, for your lovely comment, and for placing this in your favorites. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jared Pickett January 15, 2023 at 1:37 AM Ok, i see what you mean by being playful in your writing. I really like your rhythm, the way your words flow together. " Forms flow in a feathered fashion" great line. I think you may be my new BFF on here. You have encouraged me to jump back on and put my thoughts to pen. Thank you, your #1 fan.. much love!!! Brandy Nicole January 15, 2023 at 7:19 PM Playful and Poetic in many ways. Thank you, Jared. I like this line as well. So kind of you to read this scribble of mine. You make me smile saying this. Hello, my new friend. : ) I'm so happy that I was able to encourage you and your muse. You're very welcome. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Gitlan George January 14, 2023 at 7:32 AM your words is singing for me, like a bird in a blossom tree! Brandy Nicole January 14, 2023 at 7:52 PM That's so sweet and poetic. Thank you Gitlan, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Timothy Ray January 13, 2023 at 11:53 AM this is one of those where one hears the calliope erupt in the harmony of diphthongs .....a truly beautiful writing and as clever as the quill of the poetess who holds such....loved its beauty in simplicity Brandy Nicole January 13, 2023 at 7:26 PM Erupting in harmony. I like that. :) Your thoughts are elegant and graceful. Thank you, Timothy. I appreciate you and your lovely comment, along with the compliment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

James Marshall Goff January 8, 2023 at 8:33 PM Exquisite lyricism Brandy! Brandy Nicole January 10, 2023 at 5:08 PM Thank you, James. Your thoughts bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Panagiota Romios December 31, 2022 at 1:06 PM Happy New Year, Brandy A fav. To say you have a way with words is an understatement.A most most unique poetess. Panagiota Brandy Nicole December 31, 2022 at 9:06 PM I'm humbled by your compliment. Thank you Panagiota, for your lovely comment and for placing this in your favorites. Such a sweet thing to say. I'm just a simple poetess. Happy New Year ! :) Hugs, Brandy

FJ Thomas December 19, 2022 at 3:47 PM A sensual song of word you have penned dear Brandy. A lovely lingual lullaby. Brandy Nicole December 20, 2022 at 6:57 PM FJ, I've never thought about this poem being a "sensual song." A "lullaby". Reading this again and I see, it certainly could be. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

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