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Paradox Bounteous

We look at the horizon,
oblivious to abundance,
when life appears routine,
The significance was lost,
Being too satisfied with norms,
whereas many others had fewer,
Thus, this gap should be reduced,
be present with our offering

Written: October 16, 2022

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Bill Baker October 19, 2022 at 8:29 AM Magnitizing picture, Lasaad. your poem expressed the need the focus on the presence in order to fully experience it's value and message to us, less we miss the its truth. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, my friend. Bill

Sand Blown October 17, 2022 at 5:20 PM ....a very beautiful photo....right for the poem.....stan sand

Valsa George October 16, 2022 at 6:57 PM We should stretch our reach to wider spaces instead of confining ourselves to the routine and stay dissatisfied. Live every moment knowing that many do not have as much as we have. Lasaad your poems are too deep for me to explicate.

Sand Blown October 16, 2022 at 3:23 PM ...nice one....paradox defines time as life.. ...paradox(h)icals get noticed.....stans sand

Mystic Rose Rose October 16, 2022 at 2:48 PM We should always be present in the moment, with bounty generously given and received, nicely penned dear poet, m45