Paradox Bounteous

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We look at the horizon, oblivious to abundance, when life appears routine, The significance was lost, Being too satisfied with norms, whereas many others had fewer, Thus, this gap should be reduced, be present with our offering Written: October 16, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/19/2022 8:29:00 AM

Magnitizing picture, Lasaad. your poem expressed the need the focus on the presence in order to fully experience it's value and message to us, less we miss the its truth. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, my friend. Bill

Sand Blown

Date: 10/17/2022 5:20:00 PM

....a very beautiful photo....right for the poem.....stan sand

Valsa George

Date: 10/16/2022 6:57:00 PM

We should stretch our reach to wider spaces instead of confining ourselves to the routine and stay dissatisfied. Live every moment knowing that many do not have as much as we have. Lasaad your poems are too deep for me to explicate.

Sand Blown

Date: 10/16/2022 3:23:00 PM

...nice one....paradox defines time as life.. ...paradox(h)icals get noticed.....stans sand

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/16/2022 2:48:00 PM

We should always be present in the moment, with bounty generously given and received, nicely penned dear poet, m45