Paradox

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Except for the kids they are all fake..! Don't get old it's a trap for you Written: June 15, 2021 All Yours (Jun 22) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2021 3:08:00 PM

Definitely growing old is not for sissies. I think keep making new friends with younger people, and enjoying your life is the best way to handle most of the problems we face. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/16/2021 7:09:00 PM

WoW! Lasaad, Deep ink with much to ponder, my friend. I shall be thinking about after I’ve finished reading it:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/17/2021 11:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Alexis. Your kind words shed a lot of charm on this Haiku, my profound regards, and blessings.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/16/2021 2:45:00 PM

This one is an absolute truth Lasaad, once the innocence of childhood dissipates, all the bull that comes with adulthood begins, really is hard not to be sceptical in such a world, a fine meaningful write, I think most people can relate to this one, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/16/2021 10:22:00 PM

No need Lasaad, we all have separate lives to live beyond the soup I myself have been very busy, so really only time for posts, thank you.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/16/2021 6:05:00 PM

Thank you for your nice words. David, it's a true fact that childhood is a period of innocence, and the older we become, the more guiltlessness gives way to the condition of being obloquy. I apologize for missing several of your poetry since I went on a brief trip. My very best wishes