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Paradise-Acrostic

Parents kissing and enveloping children in their warmth Always enthused with their crazy ideas abundant Roaring laughter resounding in the cloudy zenith Applause at every singular innocent achievement Discourses and tales on virtues of selfless activities Imbibing values with every smiling action of doyens Singing in a medley of exuberant symphonies Ecstatically playing with angels in the star decked gardens December 24, 2015 Contest: Paradise Acrostic Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Skat A

Date: 12/28/2015 10:20:00 PM

Balveen, a very nice win. SKAT

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/29/2015 12:20:00 AM

Thanks Skat and wish you a joyous & fulfilled 2016!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2015 4:23:00 AM

Balveen, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/29/2015 12:21:00 AM

Lina, thanks and wish you a bright & happy new year!

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/27/2015 6:33:00 PM

A VERY DESERVING RENDITION OF A FAMILY PARADISE. Congrats on your win!! A7

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/29/2015 12:23:00 AM

Robert, many thanks and I wish you and your family a stupendously happy new year!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/27/2015 5:21:00 PM

Superb acrostic that deserves to be on the winners' list! Congratulations, Balveen, on youw wonderful win! Pandita

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/29/2015 12:24:00 AM

Pandita, that was sweet of you to think so! Wish you anda your family a god gifted new year!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2015 3:19:00 PM

oh it reminds me of being with children after one has died and playing with those little angels!! But on earth, just giving them lots of love and attention. Nicely woven acrostic. Congrats.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/29/2015 12:26:00 AM

Thanks Andrea! All good wishes and many more bounties in the new year!