Paradise

Timeless space… Moving on… Beauty feels Colorful… Paradise… Forever Grand entry… Hope reaches… No ending Russell Sivey Entrant into ... Gigno's "Ellip" contest 2/11/2013

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... Gigno

Date: 2/28/2013 9:06:00 PM

!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2013 11:28:00 PM

hey, very nicely done. I prefer the lines going across this way as well!!

Holly Moore

Date: 2/13/2013 1:07:00 PM

This is a great description and beautiful! Thanks for your most gracious and kind words on my poem "A Kiss Upon Your Cheek"....It's non fiction and your comments made me feel so good about my writing! xx Holly Moore

Jack Horne

Date: 2/13/2013 8:23:00 AM

what a great entry for this contest - a big winner for sure

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 2/12/2013 1:26:00 PM

I like "timeless space". That is how I envision it. Awesome write, Russell. Good luck!

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 2/12/2013 2:13:00 AM

well written Russell, good material...well, couldn't do one myself..., good luck in the contest..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2013 9:30:00 PM

Dear Russell, I love the purest atmosphere away from this earthly ground, your poem took me to a place were i would be safe from all evil. I truly love the ever-changing background beyond all mountains, sea and blue sky - a wonderful reach of Paradise. enjoyed the haiku.... LINDA