Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Poet Free verse

Paradise

Paradise is  reserved only for the  holy 
                 People,  
Entering paradise on that day, It is my daily            
                  Prayer
I maintain my heavenly  status while living on
                This planet. 
How happy will I  be to meet
                The Lord 
     And dance with his  
                  Angles. 

Paradise is  reserved only for the holy 
                  People 
I always try  my best to  be  good with many   
                   People 
I always avoid to do any wrong thing which can upset
                  My Lord 
Happiness is me as I know to differentiate 
            Good and bad 
Holyman is me as the Spirit of Christ Jesus is      
                  With me 
  My name is registered in  the book of 
                   The Lord. 

March 27/2023
Written for poetry contest sponsored by Constance la France 
Theme : PARADISE

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Gershon Wolf April 4, 2023 at 6:30 PM Here's to hoping that sincere repentance and redress of sins committed can also gain a share of the World to Come. :) Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris April 4, 2023 at 8:52 PM How hard is for some people to REPENT? The world has 75% of hypocrites As said," few will enter the Kingdom of God" May God bless you for these inspirational comments on this page. You are welcome

Constance La France April 3, 2023 at 4:38 AM Alfonso, thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge ! Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris April 3, 2023 at 7:35 AM Thanks for visiting my page and comment. Happy as you enjoyed the poem You are welcome

Sotto Poet March 30, 2023 at 7:03 PM Beautiful poem, Alfonso. Congrats on your win. Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris March 31, 2023 at 4:51 AM Thank you so much , You are welcome

Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2023 at 10:12 AM - A great poem, Alfonso :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris March 31, 2023 at 4:52 AM Thank you so much. Happy as you enjoyed reading it. You are welcome

Paula Goldsmith March 29, 2023 at 2:52 PM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/ending. Love your line, "How happy will I be to meet The Lord And dance with his Angles." Yes, a huge Hooray!!! Have a blessed day writing away.................... Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris March 30, 2023 at 4:27 AM Thank you so much ,Paula Receiving the blessings , Happy to read this nice comment on this blog. Your most welcome

Fin Chuuk March 27, 2023 at 9:21 PM This is very inspiring, and nicely written. All the best in the contest. :) Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris March 28, 2023 at 5:11 AM Thank you so much for visiting my blog and comment. You are welcome