Paradise

Paradise is reserved only for the holy People, Entering paradise on that day, It is my daily Prayer I maintain my heavenly status while living on This planet. How happy will I be to meet The Lord And dance with his Angles. Paradise is reserved only for the holy People I always try my best to be good with many People I always avoid to do any wrong thing which can upset My Lord Happiness is me as I know to differentiate Good and bad Holyman is me as the Spirit of Christ Jesus is With me My name is registered in the book of The Lord. March 27/2023 Written for poetry contest sponsored by Constance la France Theme : PARADISE

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/4/2023 6:30:00 PM

Here's to hoping that sincere repentance and redress of sins committed can also gain a share of the World to Come. :)

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 4/4/2023 8:52:00 PM

How hard is for some people to REPENT? The world has 75% of hypocrites As said," few will enter the Kingdom of God" May God bless you for these inspirational comments on this page. You are welcome

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 4:38:00 AM

Alfonso, thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge !

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 4/3/2023 7:35:00 AM

Thanks for visiting my page and comment. Happy as you enjoyed the poem You are welcome

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/30/2023 7:03:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Alfonso. Congrats on your win.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 3/31/2023 4:51:00 AM

Thank you so much , You are welcome

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/30/2023 10:12:00 AM

- A great poem, Alfonso :) - Congratulations on your win :) -

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 3/31/2023 4:52:00 AM

Thank you so much. Happy as you enjoyed reading it. You are welcome

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/29/2023 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/ending. Love your line, "How happy will I be to meet The Lord And dance with his Angles." Yes, a huge Hooray!!! Have a blessed day writing away....................

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 3/30/2023 4:27:00 AM

Thank you so much ,Paula Receiving the blessings , Happy to read this nice comment on this blog. Your most welcome

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/27/2023 9:21:00 PM

This is very inspiring, and nicely written. All the best in the contest. :)

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 3/28/2023 5:11:00 AM

Thank you so much for visiting my blog and comment. You are welcome