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Paradise, Means Forever With You

Paradise, Means Forever With You P romising our true love forever and a day A ctions in these wonderful years proving our vow R emembering to each and every new day say A heartfelt, "kiss me dearest darling, do it now"! D emands in our lives are to be properly placed I n our vow, I will forever hold loving you S avoring every moment, of our lives you graced E ternity is paradise loving we two! 12-22-2015 Syllables Per Line: 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 Total # Syllables: 96 John Hamilton contest: Paradise 1 original, poem on the theme of ....Paradise... Must be acrostic using the word , "paradise". No names please! Date necessary. Must be new poem!

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Date: 12/28/2015 10:19:00 PM
Robert, a very nice win. SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2015 4:20:00 AM
Robert, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 12/28/2015 3:15:00 AM
How utterly shweet and loyal, Robert! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 12/28/2015 2:04:00 AM
Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic Robert.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/27/2015 7:44:00 PM
So romantic and nicely written with rhyme and rhythm, Robert. Congratulations on your fine win.
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Date: 12/27/2015 6:36:00 PM
Wonderful write Robert...Congrats on your win
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:14:00 PM
hey, Congratulations. It is really nice to see this one again on the winners' list.
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Date: 12/27/2015 10:55:00 AM
Robert one of my favorites for the contest
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Date: 12/27/2015 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-written Paradise acrostic.
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:20:00 AM
A delightfully romantic paradise where true love comes out a winner! Well expressed, Robert...congratulations on a deserved win, my friend. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:12:00 AM
Congratulations, my friend, on a wonderful win! I love the romance - works for me every time! Warmest regards and a 7. Pandita
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Date: 12/27/2015 12:07:00 AM
Congrats Robert, I always appreciate your romantic take in almost everything, that's what love does! Very nice acrostic!
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Date: 12/22/2015 6:15:00 PM
Beautiful! Hey, when he says "must use Paradise" do you think he means it's ok to use it as the TITLE only?? Sometimes I get so confused by what they really want. I better try this one FAST. You did really well.
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Date: 12/22/2015 1:21:00 PM
- Simply beautiful poem, Robert (7) - Luck in contest - Merry Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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