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Paper Cranes

Paper cranes sway in the breeze Each celebrating the day The summerhouse is peaceful Origami birds flying

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/3/2012 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations a very nice piece xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 7:11:00 PM

BARBARA... congratulations! In Susan's contest....Enjoyed stopping by to view may winners tonight!! Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 3/2/2012 5:01:00 PM

Barbara, well done. Congrats on making Susan's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/2/2012 2:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my contest! wonderful imagery :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Paper Or Plastic" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Carol Eastman

Date: 2/29/2012 8:06:00 AM

I have a friend from China that soes the most beautiful orgami... Great memories and imagery. Truly loved this one.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/22/2012 5:05:00 PM

I can picture it all!! And it makes me sigh with ahhhhhhhh!! Nicely done, Barbara!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/22/2012 3:22:00 PM

this is lovely and very easy to picture!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2012 1:47:00 PM

Beautiful written Barbara,thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2012 1:18:00 PM

What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Barbara. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/22/2012 11:29:00 AM

Hello, dear LNC. This is a lovely desciption of the origami cranes flying in the breeze. A wonderful entry for the paper or plastic contest and I wish you success. Miss you. Love, Carolyn