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Paper Cranes

                              Paper cranes sway in the breeze
                              Each celebrating the day
                              The summerhouse  is peaceful
                              Origami  birds flying

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2012

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 3/3/2012 6:06:00 AM Congratulations a very nice piece xx Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/2/2012 7:11:00 PM BARBARA... congratulations! In Susan's contest....Enjoyed stopping by to view may winners tonight!! Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 3/2/2012 5:01:00 PM Barbara, well done. Congrats on making Susan's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 3/2/2012 2:29:00 PM Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my contest! wonderful imagery :) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/2/2012 11:01:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Paper Or Plastic" contest Barbara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carol Eastman Date: 2/29/2012 8:06:00 AM I have a friend from China that soes the most beautiful orgami... Great memories and imagery. Truly loved this one. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 2/22/2012 5:05:00 PM I can picture it all!! And it makes me sigh with ahhhhhhhh!! Nicely done, Barbara! Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 2/22/2012 3:22:00 PM this is lovely and very easy to picture! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2012 1:47:00 PM Beautiful written Barbara,thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/22/2012 1:18:00 PM What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Barbara. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/22/2012 11:29:00 AM Hello, dear LNC. This is a lovely desciption of the origami cranes flying in the breeze. A wonderful entry for the paper or plastic contest and I wish you success. Miss you. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply