Barbara Gorelick Poet Free verse

Paper Cranes

                              Paper cranes sway in the breeze
                              Each celebrating the day
                              The summerhouse  is peaceful
                              Origami  birds flying

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 3, 2012 at 6:06 AM Congratulations a very nice piece xx

Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2012 at 7:11 PM BARBARA... congratulations! In Susan's contest....Enjoyed stopping by to view may winners tonight!! Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Samual Ronthorpe March 2, 2012 at 5:01 PM Barbara, well done. Congrats on making Susan's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

Black Eyed Susan March 2, 2012 at 2:29 PM Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my contest! wonderful imagery :)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2012 at 11:01 AM Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Paper Or Plastic" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Carol Eastman February 29, 2012 at 8:06 AM I have a friend from China that soes the most beautiful orgami... Great memories and imagery. Truly loved this one.

Carrie Richards February 22, 2012 at 5:05 PM I can picture it all!! And it makes me sigh with ahhhhhhhh!! Nicely done, Barbara!

Ilene Bauer February 22, 2012 at 3:22 PM this is lovely and very easy to picture!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2012 at 1:47 PM Beautiful written Barbara,thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2012 at 1:18 PM What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Barbara. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire February 22, 2012 at 11:29 AM Hello, dear LNC. This is a lovely desciption of the origami cranes flying in the breeze. A wonderful entry for the paper or plastic contest and I wish you success. Miss you. Love, Carolyn