Pandemonium

P ain   devastation engraved on townsfolk’s faces
A s  vile earthquake raked homes, claimed lives;
N othing but trauma lashed  this chaotic scene
D eaths numbering ten, forty, and hundreds rose as
E mergency  aid  dragged from crushed infrastructure.
M inutes after, a city once rich endured shock-waves
O f confusion, famine and loss... each groan unbearable;
N ameless bones piled under rocks of torment… O children 
I n a stupor, looked for their mothers     freezing, pining,
U naware of a 7.2  grill  flattening a paradise to the ground…
M isery! Misery only nature can tell, but she answered not.



8..04..2016
John Hamilton's Pandemonium Contest

~ The 2013 Bohol earthquake in the Philippines was one of the
fiercest disasters  to hit the country since 1990. Famous landmarks
and attractions were destroyed, with 671,103 families affected. ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 8/7/2016 8:50:00 PM
Congrats!!! Eve...well done my friend on your Acrostic...on a very sad reality...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/7/2016 7:01:00 PM
Nette, such a powerful acrostic, well done lady, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:31:00 PM
A 7 for your WINNING poem, Nette! Janice
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Date: 8/6/2016 11:56:00 AM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
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Date: 8/3/2016 9:23:00 PM
Stark, frightening piece, nette- I've only experienced minor quakes here, but the one thing that I vividly remember is the awful feeling of helplessness. Good luck in the contest. Viv x
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Date: 8/3/2016 7:26:00 PM
Wow, you captured this so well. I hope to never experience such devastation. This must have been so horrible for those people.
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Date: 8/3/2016 4:58:00 PM
What a powerful write, Nette....all the more because it is a true incident. My heart goes out to people who have gone through such horrific natural disasters. Poems like this help keep their memories alive. Good luck on the contest.
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Date: 8/3/2016 4:27:00 PM
I felt my heart being tugged as I read this compelling poem. So beautifully tragic, and touching --- the emotional content and build-up made me tremble. And the picture was so apt, brave one!
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Date: 8/3/2016 3:54:00 PM
this is one form pandemonium takes and it's a very sad one indeed. Has your country had very many. Utah is expecting a very major one soon. Sure do not want to see it!!
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Date: 8/3/2016 3:44:00 PM
Excellent poetry in a time of uncertainty. This is stamped with phrases bringing a tragic event to surface for us to be reminded of nature's scorn. The last time stunned me! You have a deep soul!
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Date: 8/3/2016 3:12:00 PM
It is a great story telling acrostic, nette. It is sad how quickly we forget, yet the devastation lingers. My dad was stationed in the Philippines many many years ago. He always said what a beautiful place it was and how friendly the people were.
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