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Exquisite throes You feigned forgive Such shining sand But sans a sieve. While your intent Was double-down You kissed me deep To watch me drown. A phoenix flamed Availed and cursed Thus meant to quell Your fiery thirst ... But molten ire So coolly poured Is hell-and-gone ... Your hellish hoard. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Strand Select Y Any Form Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/23/2020 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:20:00 PM
Thanks, Sam.
Date: 2/21/2020 11:25:00 AM
Love the contrasting words...the tug and pull! Nicely done, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. <3

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