Pampas Grass

pampas grass creamy white tassels... car's wake ripples

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/13/2015 2:11:00 PM

Dear Sara, Reading poems this evening and this one caught my eye. Always loved pampas grass, the way those leaves and fluffy tassels stir in the breeze. The wake of a car would certainly set them rustling. Nicely done~Delice

Anu Nayak

Date: 9/12/2015 12:44:00 PM

Dear Sara, its an.awesome haiku! ...Love, Anu:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2015 11:52:00 PM

really cool imagery, Sara. Good one.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/10/2015 3:35:00 PM

oh, I can see this very vividly

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2015 8:25:00 PM

Ha, I love it... Never thought of it as pampered. ..good one ..Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2015 1:29:00 PM

- A really good haiku, Sara - Awesome last line! - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/3/2015 8:35:00 AM

cool poem Sara.. like the 2nd line.. :D but the third line, you got me there.. :D!~Olive ELoisa ... :D

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/3/2015 2:46:00 AM

A wise and beautiful constructed.... The flow of your beautiful write with vivid picture met the readers like and love..... Stay blessed Sara..............A.M.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 10:05:00 PM

enjoyed your haiku Sarah:)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2015 9:50:00 AM

very beautiful hakiu:-) hugs Jan xx