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Palindrome Hell

My civic duty did shout at me To get my rotavator out The garden screams come on now do the deed And get me sorted out The level is steady my grass you can see Is now lush short and green. My eye can see this cut for me Is so good, it really should be seen. “Madam” says the posh lady walking by “Wow your garden has now reached perfection Can you give me a hint or two, For my own lawns resurrection.” Aha mam, with my help you will be able to astound If it’s ok with you I’ll pop and see what’s in your ground I’ll peep at it let you know, and I’ll do it soon I’ll be round tomorrow morning or maybe the time of noon.
Civic, Did, Rotavator, Deed, Level, Eye, Madam Wow, Aha, Mam, Peep, Pop, Noon By Mandy Tams~GG~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/29/2012 4:51:00 PM
I remember this contest, found it too hard, with the time i had, but seeing this, tells me, i stood no chance anyway.. brilliant
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Date: 6/6/2012 2:00:00 PM
An interesting idea... and a nice poem... Terry
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Date: 6/6/2012 12:43:00 PM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Mandy. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2012 12:54:00 PM
Good job..Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/24/2012 4:10:00 AM
This is adorable ~GG~ as usual you are such a wonderful story teller! Great job! Congrats on your win!! :) and Thank you for all your kindness and encouragements to me..big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/23/2012 5:32:00 PM
Hi Mandy - Congratulations to you! Enjoyed reading your poem. - Gail
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Date: 4/23/2012 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/22/2012 6:18:00 PM
LOL ..quite a toot! Congrad's on your Big win Light & Love
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Date: 4/22/2012 4:08:00 PM
congrats on your win Mandy... always...Joseph
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:14:00 PM
Congrats Mandy!,,,,,so your lawn is THIS GREEN?...What fun humor! Couplets really flowed and energy was great too. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:04:00 PM
Great use of so many palidromes!!! Above and beyond...good for you!! Congratulations Mandy, nice to share this spot with your talent!
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mandy. Wonderful. Very clever. Enjoyed. Great job. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:47:00 AM
Good job with a task that was not easy.
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Date: 4/3/2012 6:13:00 AM
Wow...great job with this poem....Enjoyed
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/3/2012 9:17:00 AM
It was hard ....thanks xx
Date: 4/2/2012 3:30:00 PM
What a great job!!! This one wasn't easy!! :) Good luck, Mandy!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/3/2012 9:18:00 AM
No it wasn't Carrie I didn't even know what one was xx

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