Palindrome Hell

My civic duty did shout at me To get my rotavator out The garden screams come on now do the deed And get me sorted out The level is steady my grass you can see Is now lush short and green. My eye can see this cut for me Is so good, it really should be seen. “Madam” says the posh lady walking by “Wow your garden has now reached perfection Can you give me a hint or two, For my own lawns resurrection.” Aha mam, with my help you will be able to astound If it’s ok with you I’ll pop and see what’s in your ground I’ll peep at it let you know, and I’ll do it soon I’ll be round tomorrow morning or maybe the time of noon.
Civic, Did, Rotavator, Deed, Level, Eye, Madam Wow, Aha, Mam, Peep, Pop, Noon By Mandy Tams~GG~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 4:51 PM
I remember this contest, found it too hard, with the time i had, but seeing this, tells me, i stood no chance anyway.. brilliant
O'Leary Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 2:00 PM
An interesting idea... and a nice poem... Terry
Brown Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 12:43 PM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Mandy. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Good job..Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats on your win..Sara
Burch Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 4:10 AM
This is adorable ~GG~ as usual you are such a wonderful story teller! Great job! Congrats on your win!! :) and Thank you for all your kindness and encouragements to me..big hugs,love deb
Debole Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 5:32 PM
Hi Mandy - Congratulations to you! Enjoyed reading your poem. - Gail
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 7:11 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 6:18 PM
LOL ..quite a toot! Congrad's on your Big win Light & Love
May Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 4:08 PM
congrats on your win Mandy... always...Joseph
Song Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Congrats Mandy!,,,,,so your lawn is THIS GREEN?...What fun humor! Couplets really flowed and energy was great too. :) Gwendolen
Richards Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:04 PM
Great use of so many palidromes!!! Above and beyond...good for you!! Congratulations Mandy, nice to share this spot with your talent!
Taylor Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:55 PM
Congrats on your win, Mandy. Wonderful. Very clever. Enjoyed. Great job. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Pettit Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Good job with a task that was not easy.
Squyres Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 6:13 AM
Wow...great job with this poem....Enjoyed
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 9:17 AM
It was hard ....thanks xx
Richards Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 3:30 PM
What a great job!!! This one wasn't easy!! :) Good luck, Mandy!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 9:18 AM
No it wasn't Carrie I didn't even know what one was xx
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