Palindrome: Dumb-old-dork of Exports

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Poetic Form: Limerick
Inspired: 2024 May 26

*2nd Place*
Palindrome Limerick
Contest Judged: 2024 May 31
Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Mom spilled hot stew, wets a pal, lap short-shorts, Dad yelled its hot, loop pool pop dive exhorts, Mom says not that sort of hot, Pip, spiced hot that's all it got? Snot tons, "Jokes--Pip, we're exports, not Hogwarts?"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2024 10:37:00 PM

Back with my congrats. Aloha

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/2/2024 1:31:00 AM

Andrea, your nriching kindness is much appreciated, Aloha. William

Joseph May

Date: 6/1/2024 6:35:00 AM

Very nicely done Hilo, Congrats on your win

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/1/2024 8:41:00 AM

I had fun in the efforts, Joseph, thank you, Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2024 8:24:00 AM

Fun palindromes, William. I like to see you doing limericks.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/27/2024 12:21:00 PM

Andrea, solo's are easy but when they're paired, side-by-side are difficult if one choose to maintain palindromic truths as a simple interfering article fails meaningful dexterity. Mahalo, my friend, blessings, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/26/2024 9:04:00 AM

you're good at constructing Limericks. Thanks for the wit and humor this morning, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/26/2024 10:51:00 AM

Last minute drop for Joseph as well as Edawrd's Requiem--if it wasn't for PSs website woes--phew. Thanks, Sara, Aloha, William