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This is my first attempt at this form. Thinking about entering it in the contest. Should I? Feel free to give me your in put:-) Alexis

Springtime reminds me of my “dad.” He loved how the flowers got redder, When it's “noon” in spring I’m a lil lad. I think “mom” enjoys its weather. “WoW” as I gaze at majestic trees, I feel peace on a different “level”. Me and my sis “Anna” kneel on knees, Our “civic” duty wasn’t to revel. When we stood up we got in our “Kayak”, In our minds it like being a in “racecar”. Dad got one with a “ rotor” in the back. "Sis" hoped for speed and that's bizarre. 10-5-18

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Date: 10/8/2018 1:57:00 PM
Alexis, It seems fine to me...but I havent a clue how to write one of these. It is above my level of knowledge. I enjoyed it, if that helps any. : )
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Date: 10/8/2018 10:04:00 AM
Hi Alexis, I love all the seasons. To me, spring is when nature comes alive again after its winter sleep, all seems new and fresh. Why not enter the piece. I like the fun and lightness of the piece. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend....Mike.
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Date: 10/7/2018 9:39:00 AM
This is a perfect entry, Alexis, go ahead and enter:)
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Date: 10/6/2018 7:50:00 AM
Alexis, this is a great fun one for the contest. Well done :)
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Date: 10/6/2018 5:31:00 AM
Lovely play on words herein. Alexis, I enjoy your dexterous display of palindromes. Much love, Adeniji
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Date: 10/6/2018 4:56:00 AM
Well you've managed what I'm still thinking about, have never done any palindrome verses but you have, enter it , that's what contests do fire up your muse. Tom.
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Date: 10/6/2018 3:02:00 AM
I am not so good at forms in general or this one, but I really enjoyed the poem!!
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