Pale Shelter John Hamilton Poetry Contest

Pale Shelter
A Song by the Band
Tears for Fears

Was i supposed to know ?
The answers ?
Or whether they were merely questions ?
With changing goalposts
Less and Less
The relationship power sands shift
In opposing directions 

When all i want is love
You reduce me to tears
All i want is love
Yet you highlight my fears

How am i to know ?
When i am at your mercy
Treated with unloving courtesy

When all i want is love
You reduce me to tears
When all i asked of you was love
You terrorised me with fears

Im not going there with you again
It's time to break this unholy covenant

All i ever wanted was you to love me
But all you ever gave me was tears
And brought to life my fears

28 November 2019
For John Hamilton's
Pale Shelter Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/7/2019 5:45:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Christopher
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/7/2019 7:19:00 PM
Cheers G.P Much appreciated ta Thank you
Date: 12/7/2019 2:00:00 PM
Nice write Christopher, thanks for your entry, congrats on a fine placement!
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/7/2019 3:38:00 PM
Cheers John Ta thank you my pleasure , so very much appreciated Kind Regards Chris
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