Pale Shelter

i look out my eyes,
windshield wipers —
crying all the time,
inside.

the shy gives me the creepers,
living all the time;
buried treasure,
the shovel of survival, hides.

the teacher writes one word,
at a time,
on the enormous blackboard,
looming in my mind.

pretty...pretty...pretty

the violence in my history
destroying the self
not a believer
in books that “help”

disconnected, illusions looming

salesman tries to gimmee
some direction

it’s a one way road

out

my cheeks are red,
my eyes are blue
darkness finds me with you

the wipers fast, never stop
   skidding shoes
      wheels turning
          spinning, burning


12/2/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Na Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 5:41 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 5:52 PM
Thank you, Hreg!
Blodgett Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 2:16 PM
What a beautiful free verse! Lonna
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Thank you, Lonna!
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 1:47 PM
This is what free verse is supposed to be, a little erratic and frantic, this was a stirring write Kim, congrats on a fine win!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Thanks so much, John!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 4:44 AM
"the violence in my history destroying the self not a believer in books that “help” - I am so with you on this one!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 3:15 PM
Thanks
Bayles Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 3:43 PM
This poem has a great turn and a great ending.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Thanks for noticing!
Callus Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 3:29 PM
I can see where the "Pale Shelter" prompt has taken you, Kim. A very out creative 'of the box' rendition. Warm regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Thanks so much!
Green Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:06 AM
I loved this Kim. Such an abstract look at things and so creative. Always I find something amazing when you write. Best wishes in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Hugs...I appreciate it so much!
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