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Palangga, Beloved

. langga, before I go, could we watch the afterglow? it won't take long I'll be a half- forgotten song. slowly setting sun, soothing sweet, its end has begun. brightly beaming, sadly sighing, its light now dying. softly seething sky, blazing burst of colors draws a sigh. flaming clouds on high, sun's farewell, langga, goodbye! .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/2/2011 12:47:00 PM
Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Romeo. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 11:44:00 AM
me too, proud to be noypi ( bisaya ka man?) ! elegant and poignant, romeo... :) huggs, nette
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Romeo Naces
Date: 5/29/2019 11:00:00 PM
Salamat gid, Nette.
Date: 6/2/2011 4:10:00 AM
hoooh...so proud to be a filipino.... good luck!!!! ****jun-jun
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Romeo Naces
Date: 5/29/2019 11:00:00 PM
Salamat, Kabayan Jun-jun.

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