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Painted

Pastel droplets fall from Pink sprinkled sunlight on Ponds and meadows blooming Pathways of color as Pearly breasted bluebirds Perch where past springtimes have Painted my heart with hope 3/27/23 Writing Challenge P Words Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Charles Messina

Date: 5/2/2023 5:36:00 AM

Wow! This is really cool... You did this so well. Love it :) Belated congrats!

Ann Peck

Date: 4/16/2023 10:06:00 AM

Beautiful! "pearly breasted bluebirds Perch where past springtimes have painted my heart with hope." wonderful! I just re-read your "April Snow" poem. It's so sadly true. Nature is saying farewell. Congratulations on your win!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/11/2023 7:54:00 AM

Just stunning Michelle ! Loved every bit of your painted vision . Belated congratulations on your win ! Susan :)

Hat Bueckert

Date: 4/5/2023 7:30:00 PM

Beautiful words, you've painted quite a picture indeed :)

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 4:33:00 AM

Michelle, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/1/2023 8:26:00 AM

Oh, this is just so dreamy and beautiful, Michelle. I adore every verse of exquisite imagery as each line unfolds and evolves into the next to come together in vivid life upon the page and within my imagination. Moments in a sacred place captured with your golden pen. "Painted" is a perfect title for this sensual feast for the senses anchored by a sense of belonging and appreciation. Great last line too! :) A winner of course! Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/29/2023 10:56:00 PM

OH your poetry is unique Michelle, love this.

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/29/2023 8:52:00 PM

Perfect Ps:) congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/29/2023 2:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely/pretty write. Have a blessed day writing away....................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/28/2023 7:13:00 PM

Ppppppretty good! ! :) gw

Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2023 8:53:00 PM

Oh, I love the line, Painted my heart with hope. Good luck, I'd forgotten the form. PS try my contest.

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/27/2023 7:32:00 PM

Fabulous poem, Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/27/2023 8:10:00 PM

Thank you, Finn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2023 4:37:00 PM

wow, what an awesome idea doing this style poem for the word. Why didn't I think of that??

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/27/2023 8:10:00 PM

I just thought it would be fun to do this form, thanks for commenting, Andrea~

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/27/2023 12:10:00 PM

This is lovely, Michelle! I really like the Pleiades form and you “painted” your imagery so perfectly here! Good luck in the contest! :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/27/2023 3:51:00 PM

I appreciate it, thank you kindly, Laura~

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/27/2023 12:04:00 PM

A poem beautifully painted in P words. Delightful as colors and spirits of spring. Much enjoyed your poem, Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/27/2023 3:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Vijay

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/27/2023 11:37:00 AM

This beauty of a poem is pure sensual delight, Michelle. It is in my faves. :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/27/2023 11:50:00 AM

I am very flattered, thank you for the compliment, Evelyn~

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/27/2023 11:08:00 AM

WoW! Michelle, I like the form and you did it justice. You painted a lovely "Spring" with words. Exceptional last line. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/27/2023 11:11:00 AM

I'm glad you liked it, thank you for your comment, Alexis~

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/27/2023 10:59:00 AM

Very nice spring poem, Michelle. Pink has a dual meaning, childhood for light pink and romance for hot pink. Spring is the time for both:)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/27/2023 11:10:00 AM

For me, the colors of spring are pink, yellow and green, (with a splash of lavender thrown in) thank you for your visit and comment, Daniel~