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For Joseph May's Paint a Picture poetry contest

This image reminded me of when my grandma used to sit on the veranda and rock gently on her armchair... However, she did not live by the sea....

Paint a Picture

Image 1.

As platinum clouds drift by,
sea breeze in early evening,
kisses ripples on incoming tide.
Dusk's sun reflects upon veranda,
as nanna's armchair rocks gently.
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Proxenos Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations SO this poem is so perfect as you thoughtfully selected words that immediately illustrates the picture in ones minds eye. What a lovely scene for your nana to look upon in her later years. You are a loving family man. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
George Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Congratulations on your lovely win Dear, Silent One.
Jones Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 11:55 AM
Belated congratulations on your win! This is beautiful and very peaceful.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading "Paint a Picture." A wonderful story told in just 5 lines... Have a great day writing away..................
May Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 5:41 AM
Congrats on your win Silent, Very nicely penned
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 5:19 PM
A sweet personalization of “Nanna’s armchair.” Congrats, Silent!
George Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 10:00 PM
The picture made me think of my granddad and it's so fresh because he just left us. I didn't want to worry my emotional sensitivity. Nicely written as always Dear Silent. They do enjoy their time sitting and just pondering about life, family and nature. The peace you see on their faces when they rock it, before grandchildren come running around. Cheers.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 4:25 PM
Maybe I need to redo mine!
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Oh man. I couldn't tell if it was a rocking chair bot now that I look more closely , I think I see it. Also the fact it was a sea view. Did not even enter my mind. I think I was too caught up in remembering my grandpa on a farm. Good one, S.O.
Kauffman Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 11:07 AM
Hi SO! This truly is a poetic picture of the prompt. Beautiful images of "platinum clouds" and "incoming tides." Wonderfully written tribute to your grandmother in a picture of serenity! Best wishes for the contest. I have a feeling this is a winner! Blessings!
Hind Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Gorgeous imagery here! Wow, I want to vanish into your picture, words and image, lol- :)
Narain Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Nice poem. I will enjoy the rocking chair on verandah like that.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Very beautiful read!
George Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 9:49 PM
I love this. Beautiful description of the sea side resort and the rocking chair where your grandma used to relax in the evenings. The things used by the dear departed ones can rouse a lot of fond memories in us.
Canerdy Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 7:35 PM
S. O., this is such a lovely, descriptive poem. I especially like the last line! Janice
Rose  Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 6:57 PM
She must have been your sea breeze dear poet, near ocean or not, her memory still waves the air around you, and your sweet sweet mind. Thanks for sharing S, winning wishes on the wings of a dove :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:36 PM
poignant lines dominate your overall imagery, S...we share the same sentiments: grrreat job!
DiMino Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:17 PM
Nicely phrased. Very calming and wholesome. Well done.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 3:37 PM
Hello silent One, I love this poem. It will be my fav. You have painted a lovely scene with your words. Enjoy byour evening my friend. /Darlene/
Jones Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 3:22 PM
Beautiful as everyone says! You’re sure to do well in the contest! Good luck!
M  Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 2:08 PM
Just beautiful S.O with a tinge of melancholy! Debx
Empress Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 1:57 PM
How beautiful and evocative this is, i thought of my grandpa when i saw this picture and i really love how descriptive your take is. Perfectly describes what you can see in the picture prompt. I especially love “ kisses ripples on incoming tide. Dusk's sun reflects upon veranda,” stunning and poignant write, one that also emanates nostalgia and grief, In the most eloquent manner. Its amazing how one can say so much in just five lines, but its you, So there is no surprise there. Best wishes
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