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Pain : Joy

Pain: the giant predator On life's jungle field; always hunting Joy: the tenuous prey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/17/2013 2:50:00 PM
tenuous!! great word for joy!
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Date: 7/21/2013 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 5/4/2013 5:20:00 AM
Great work..Very true comparisons..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were appreciated..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2013 7:44:00 PM
Hi Angel, I like Joy, ..this is a very clever haiku. I like the cycle of the imagery...xox~ Linda
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Date: 2/28/2013 1:59:00 PM
Great one!
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Date: 1/22/2013 5:05:00 AM
amazing haiku, Angel...
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Date: 1/10/2013 2:46:00 AM
- Yes - Well said in a haiku Angel - oxox// Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2013 3:39:00 PM
so true ,great write Angel
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